Uptown Moon (rev)
A full moon flits afloat on August winds...a rabbit warren tower of love affairs...with countless conversations... numbing sins;and bits of stardust sifting everywhere.A bachelor is padding through...
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Fran... smooth as silk bedsheets and so shot full of imagery, it's like a 3D vignette of real life.I like the way you keep the moon involved is so many of your sonnets.Lots of fine lines,as always, to...
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Thanks Sue, I'm glad to know the story was reliably conveyed. I have taken to taking a day off during the full moon. I do an all-nighter or two, then recover til next month. I'm sure that sounds like...
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I like the switch...it works perfectly...with the moon opening and closing.nice Sue******************To have great poetry there must be great audiences, --Walt Whitman
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